Another cat

Welcome to my site and thanks for joining! The rules are simple:
1. For right now, you can have up to three characters. As more people join, the limit will rise.
2. NO, I repeat, NO trash-talk is allowed. NO swearing, and NO put-downs. Please. Violators will be banned for as long as the Mods and/or Admins believe nessesary.
...That's....that's about it. I'l add more as they come to mind.

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Member Posts : 7 Join date : 2009-09-04

Name: Sparrowpaw/song
Gender: Female
Age: 10 moons

Affiliate: Riverclan
Rank: Medi cat Apprentice

Features: Brown tabby she cat with green eyes, link below for picture
https://media.photobucket.com/image/brown%20tabby%20kitten/lotublossom2006/BrownTabbyKitten.jpg
Personality:

History: unknown

Role Play Sample: No need

Member Posts : 7 Join date : 2009-09-04

Personality: Kind and caring. Can get even the most stubourn kits to eat there herbs. Friendly and has always wanted to help her clan. She knew this would be the best way to do it.
History: She never believed in starclan or the warrior code as a kit but at the start of her apprenticehood she heard the calling of starclan and knew better than to ignore it.

Subject: Re: Another cat Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:49 pm

Personality is a lot of Fragments...><

And, your History is a long Run-On...

Member Posts : 7 Join date : 2009-09-04

What do you mean?

Subject: Re: Another cat Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:04 am

Quote :: She never believed in starclan or the warrior code as a kit but at the start of her apprenticehood she heard the calling of starclan and knew better than to ignore it.

If you read it, the ONLY puntuation is the period at the end... And, History should be more than 3 sentences...

Quote :: Kind and caring. Can get even the most stubourn kits to eat there herbs. Friendly and has always wanted to help her clan. She knew this would be the best way to do it.

Kind and Caring is a Fragment. Con get even the most stubborn kits to eat their herbs is a fragment... Friendly and has always wanted to help her clan... FRAGMENT...

Subject: Re: Another cat Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:00 pm

What about the role play sample?

Subject: Re: Another cat Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:35 pm

The RP sample is for the First BIO only...

Subject: Re: Another cat Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:53 pm

Subject: Re: Another cat Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:06 pm

Kyuubi, there's nothing in the rules about double-posting.
Or how many sentences should be wherever.
You're thinking of Flint's place.

Subject: Re: Another cat Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:01 pm

>>

So...

I'm a Grammer, Sentence Formation, ext freak...

Subject: Re: Another cat Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:35 pm

Kyuubi Kid wrote:: >>

So...

I'm a Grammer, Sentence Formation, ext freak...

I know how you feel...

Subject: Re: Another cat Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:17 pm

Approved anyway.